How to write the perfect English E-mail – Part 1

Subject lines can mean success or failure for some people which means there is a minimum standard to achieve every time you fill out the little white space. Simplistic lines with vague information such as a name can not only lead to the email being lost in the system but sometimes even end up in the Spam box!

Subject lines are also particularly important if you are writing to someone for the first time, the recipient doesn’t know who you are and can only judge based on your opening line. So how can we make it more effective? Be clear, direct and try to describe the content of your email, don’t worry about using the entire subject line space. Here are some good examples:

• [Required Action] For example Weekly Manager Meeting
• [NAME OF CONTACT] advised me to get in touch with you
• Request for [NAME OF DOCUMENT/REQUEST]
• I will be in your city next Wednesday – are you available?
• [Reminder] Feedback Form to Complete | Will take 5 Minutes

If you are sending a promotional email with no previous communication, try to avoid misleading or deceptive subjects such as:

• Re:
• Fwd:
• Urgent

Avoiding these titles at the first contact will prevent the recipient from feeling tricked or cheated and should stop the email from finishing in the Spam or Junk folder.

The next step is the greeting which can also be a potentially difficult area.

You should start with an appropriate greeting which can be divided into two parts: the salutation and the opening phrase.

The correct salutation depends considerably on the situation. If this is a formal communication to an institution, for example, the ideal beginning would be “Dear [X]”. Don’t forget, if you know your recipient is male and you really need to use it then choose “Mr + Surname” whereas if your recipient is female, avoid the Miss/Mrs controversy and choose a neutral “Ms. + Surname”.

If this email is going to someone we know or someone with whom you have a casual relation with, a simple “Hi + Name” or “Hello + Name” is completely fine.

You can also use “To whom it may concern” when you are sending the email to a group of different people or if you are unsure as to who will be reading the message.

Try where possible to avoid using gendered or non-neutral or inclusive terms such as “Hi guys” or Mr/Mrs/Miss (unless you are very confident) to prevent any offence from being taken.

Some good examples of salutations could be:

• Hi Team
• Good Morning / Afternoon / Evening
• [Name]
• Hey (for a very informal approach)

Once we have written the salutation we can get on with the actual email.

For the following part, we need to keep the attention of the reader focused on what you need so we try to explain why we are sending this message. If this is a promotional email or to someone that you are writing to for the first time, try to open with something that you know will interest the reader.

If you have any information about the receiver this is the place to insert it so you can help to build rapport and make sure you get your message across. On the other hand, if this is just a communication to a colleague here is where we put the reason for our email. Nobody has the time or patience to try to guess what an email is about so the sooner we communicate the reason the less chance we have of losing the person’s interest.

So this is the first part of writing an effective email, but there are many more for us to look at! Keep with us as we will take a look at the second and final part in next week’s article! Remember, if you have any requests write them in the comments or get in touch if there’s something, in particular, you would like to see here or be assisted with.